I suspect I am not Carl's target market, as I prefer mil watches a little plainer and not so stylised, but that has a few more details than needed, imho. And lume that green just reminds me of the really useless stuff plastered onto the dials of 1970s Sicura chronos.
But the core of a very nice looking watch design is there with the minute track simplified, the inner ring made thinner and the lower dial script minimised.
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