Nice work
To me it has the appearance of a water damaged Seiko - which if you were after that effect or just learning what's possible - you did well for a first time
There's a ton of IG accounts showing these heavily patina'd SKX so much experience to share around the best techniques and materials.
With these Seiko dials you can (I have in the past) lightly bake the dial, and hands - essentially cooking the lume. If you time it right, pay close attention, and/or get lucky you can achieve a creamy lume plot/hand that looks more like a real patina / aged effect as opposed to the more extreme effect you have achieved.
Its good fun... I settled in the end for finding SKX with real patina and restoring them mechanically and functionally.